Poetry?

Well I'm not sure if any of you have noticed, but I'm not excatly a poem kind of person...I usually tend to slap a video on my blog and write about it, or I'll just end up rambling about something that people really just don't care about. So I decided I would give poetry one try, I don't think it's going to be very good, but somebody told me I should try anyways, so here is just a small attempt at one:

Don't you ever just
sit back and hide your face
because things will not
go right most of these days
and even though it seems
that everything's just dreams
you can't let it come around
and try to pull you down

There's a calmness on
the water that keeps you
falling back
you need to be there
you have to be there
and the lifeline keeps
on getting closer but
seems to slip away
you are not done here
you won't surrender

Haha, gee...that was a bust. That one was from a long time ago...I don't even think it makes much sense...but whatever, I warned you ahead of time that I am bad at this : )